It was too bright that the stars couldn't shine through the night,
but the sand was all glittered as if the stars went down to rest.
holding the sand, it was as if you held the whole universe in your hand
but they were merely reflection of the beauty of reality beyond our imagination.
4 ruffleschmuffled:
honestly, I think that is one of your best poems. :)
yehes naman may poem critic na 'ko :P salamat dino!
Hindi ko mabasa-basa yung tula. Laging nahihinto yung mga mata ko dun sa drowing e.
I'd buy the photo if I saw it in a picture frame. Galing!
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